Finished? Cool. Anyway, now that you're back, I was saying how much I like this caption. I'm sure it won't be everyone's cup of tea, and I'm sure I might sound like a bit of a arrogant ass for this, but I don't care. Well let me rephrase, I don't care if you dislike this particular caption. If you don't want to see more like it feel free to tell me, as I really do try to make the kinds of stuff you all want to read. But every so often you just have to make one for yourself, which this one most likely falls into. And it's not because of the story, and it's not because of the fantasy situation, as neither of them really fit my usual tastes. It's because of the last line.
The entire rest of the caption is something I've written plenty of times before, typical forced lesbian, etc. But when I finished with all of that, I still wasn't satisfied. I just really wanted something...more. I wanted to care about the main character, about what he went through. Yet as it was, I didn't. Not any more than I've cared about any other main character I've used. So I added the last line, and it made all the difference. Suddenly this is someone with hopes and dreams and he's forced to watch them all be destroyed because he's trying to give his wife what she wants. But in order to get closer to the woman he loves, he gives in to her desire to abandon their old relationship and form a new one that follows a mistress-sub mentality, which creates distance between them. There's still love, just a different kind of love. And he's willing to take whatever he can get.
I know that may be more depth than most people want in a quick caption like this, and if this doesn't work for you I promise there will be plenty more of my old style in the future. But I just couldn't write the usual today, I needed to care about something. Maybe it's just because I don't have the chance to write as much as I used to that I felt the need to make this one mean something, I don't know. Anyway, to those of you who actually read all this, thank you. I hoped you gained a little insight into what I was trying to do. Or maybe you just think I'm a pretentious ass, that's certainly possible too.
Happy Monday everyone!
Rauk, Great caption! I love just about every choice you made here, from the image, to the colored background, to the faded edges on the photo. But the story was really REALLY good. As I was reading I had that standard old dirty man in my head mumbling happily along 'oh yea... dirty girl.. ride that dildo... mmm she's hot...' but that last line... boy that changed everything. Dirty old man shut up, and 'Caitlyn' spoke up instead with a teary eyed 'awwww.... that's so SWEET!'
ReplyDeleteIt is incredibly rare that a cap can hit both my ying and my yang, but you got them both right here. GREAT cap! Bravo!
Thank you. And that was pretty much the same dynamic I had writing this. Typical xxx fun for almost the entire caption, and then deciding to flip it with a sentimental closer.
DeleteThis is a great cap; there's no need to be self-conscious or make excuses. As an artist, you should make whatever you are most passionate about. The best art always exists for its own sake , and this is no different.
ReplyDeleteIn case I'm overly philosophical: Great caption and thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I wasn't trying to make excuses for the caption. I wanted to give a brief insight in to how this caption came about, while reassuring my regular visitors that I'm not about to get up on literary pedestal and try to make all my captions deep or meaningful. Sometimes you just want some straightforward smut, which I will continue to happily provide in the future.
DeleteYou made a wonderful caption here! The last line really added a whole other dimension to the dynamic
ReplyDelete'Tis not my usual cup o' tea, but I quite enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteIt was an interesting story, well-told (especially with the final line's wrinkle) — isn't that what it's all about? :-)
Not really a fan of the subject matter and the second to last line kinda made it a bit worse, but hey, do whatever you want.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the caption. I really wish it was me who was the submissive little feminised sex toy in that caption :)
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