So as promised, here's a new caption before the weekend (it's before 5pm on a Friday, it counts). I wasn't feeling an overly erotic story today, so I decided to go with something a little more plot oriented than I usually do. I knew I wanted to do something from one of the formspring requests, and knew that for the ballet caption I wanted to go with something lighthearted and sexy.
So instead, I went with a surgery caption. I enjoyed writing this, but I'm not sure the end effect is exactly what I wanted. I think it still works, but there is definitely room for improvement. So I guess what I'm really saying is, there will probably be another surgery cap from me in the near future as I'm not sure I did the request full justice with this one (and hopefully the next surgery cap will focus on the smut a little more, because that's 90% of the reason we're all here in the first place, right?)
Now that is a brilliant way to disappear! I'm surprised nobody's done a cap like that before (at least not that I've seen).
ReplyDeleteI'm sure it's been done by someone before, but I can't remember seeing a caption like it anywhere else either.
DeleteThe pic is lovely, of course, but the star is the story :)
ReplyDeleteI didn't see that one coming at all, and that's rare. Nicely done.
Steffi
Thanks. I've done captions that have followed the first part of this story before, but I thought I'd have a little fun and mess with some expectations of where a caption that starts like this usually goes.
DeleteExcellent story!
ReplyDeleteGreat cap Rauk! That amazingly sexy image works perfectly as you can see the 'shock' in her eyes to match the begining of the story, but you can also see that underlying satisfaction that matches the end. That really is rare!
ReplyDeleteThanks, and it was indeed that underlying look of satisfaction that gave me the idea of taking the ending in a different direction than where I would usually go with a caption like this.
DeleteAwesome cap
ReplyDeleteThanks
DeleteWow! Talk about being a slave to ones own desires! What a shame that 'the best' seem to cater to an 'underground' clientele, rather than plying their wares to a broader, willing marketplace.
ReplyDeleteThe twist of being the 'client' is artful, Rauk! Brava!
Well by being underground they have access to a much wider range of treatments that more legitimate operations might deem "unethical."
DeleteBrilliant caption... as always superb juxtaposition of image and text and an original story and idea!
ReplyDeleteThanks, it's always nice when the strive for originality pays off.
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