Thursday, March 22, 2012

Isn't Magic Fun?

Two days, two captions, now that's more like it. This was a lot of fun to write as I love rhyming couplets. I'm pretty sure that comes from the heavy diet of Dr. Seuss I grew up with. Anyway, I figured it was time to have a little fun with my writing which inspired this cute little transformation poem. The last line still bugs me as I couldn't get the right number of syllables so the beat doesn't match, but whatever.
Enjoy.

5 comments:

  1. Awesome, Rauk! A delightful bit-o-the-gab that might make one think you've some Irish or Leprechaun in you.

    It might even be really interesting to be in her position and have that bent boy-thing bowling along in my boiling alley!

    Peace,Love&Kisses;
    Elle

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  2. Well crafted & sexy, I love the homage you payed to a few classics with this.

    Always loved that picture of her (Heather Starlet) as well, such submissiveness in those eyes.

    Now I'll just have to imagine myself as her in this cap.

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  3. I love the poem and the photo is fantastic! Together, they're just wonderful!

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  4. Simply put, one of the best captions I've ever seen!

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