Getting Pretty for Master

Here's your Wednesday Update. These were some of the last captions I submitted to tf-media, and I think only one of them was actually approved, so hopefully most of you haven't seen these yet. As for this first caption, I'm still not completely satisfied with the way the wording ended up. This was basically more of an attitude I was trying to get across, but I feel like my word choice may have gotten in the way of what I wanted to do with it. I'm interested in what you all have to say about it. Am I being too hard on myself, or am I right in saying it just feels kind of awkward?