Here's the first of hopefully several longer captions I'm currently working on. This one was a request by Amber Smithe, who wrote the general story and provided the last three images. I'm still not entirely sure how I feel about this series, but I'm leaning towards saying I like it. I tried to do something different than what I've been writing lately, and I think I succeeded in that respect. There are definitely some areas I'm not 100% satisfied with, but I could say that about almost every cap I've written. At the end of the day, I'm glad I wrote it, and I really can't ask for any more than that. Have a good weekend everyone.
what a fantastic set i loved it so subtle and seductive big hugs an kissesss ...... Meg
ReplyDeleteGotta love increased beauty caps where the girl keeps getting hotter and hotter. Loved reading this one, excellent image choices and brilliantly described. Of course, I'd expect nothing less!
ReplyDeleteLike Evie said -- you did an excellent job choosing different models for each step of the process. It's a really hot transformation!
ReplyDeleteYour desribtion of the change is really good. I like it when something is soo well written.
ReplyDeleteWho are the models for these magnificent caps?
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