Sometimes you just never know where a cap is going to end up. I originally planned on this being a lot more explicit and dirty, really explain all of the nasty things the victim would like to do to this girl but couldn't because he didn't have the right equipment anymore. But somewhere during the process of writing I took it in a different direction with the mental change aspect. I like the finished product, but it's nothing like what I originally planned. Such is the creative process, and as long as I can keep writing without too much difficulty I'm not going to complain about it.