Thursday, June 28, 2012

Right

I decided to push beyond my personal realm of experience/fantasy for today's caption. I was in the mood to write, but nothing overly sexual. So I decided to do a little character exercise with this one. One of the hardest things for writers just starting out is to write a character with a different mental state than their own. In part of my effort to continually get better at this whole writing thing, here is another attempt at capturing the voice of someone outside my normal cast of characters. Hopefully those of you out there with more experience with this kind of mind set will think I did the character justice in my portrayal of her reaction to finally achieving her dream.


2 comments:

  1. I apologize for writing this so late. I thought I had commented when it was first posted. I think you did a beautiful job of capturing the characters voice. The peaceful satisfaction of finally being who she yearned to be, I hope to feel that way someday. The image you chose matches the caption perfectly!

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  2. This story is Out standing just how I have lived my life for over 30 years i'm looking to wake up one day in the right body just like this! W/Love Eva Moore...

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