Sunday, June 3, 2012

Submission to Beauty

It's always a good day when I make a caption with the always lovely Faye Reagan. So I was happy to find the time this afternoon to make the longer cap I mentioned. As far as three panel stories go this one is still pretty short, but it was nice to do something with a little more story than my usual singles. I had some issues writing this one as I felt like it kept coming across as being an almost nonsensical ramble. I think I was just trying to go in too many different directions at the same time. I still feel the final product is a little disjointed, but it's a lot better than where it was after the first draft or two.


3 comments:

  1. A lovely tale of sweet submission! It doesn't seem disjointed. At least not to me.

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  2. Very nice story of self discovery! Very well told in words and pictures of the journey of a life waiting to be found. Excellent work on this one!

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  3. I didn't find it disjointed at all. Great Cap, beautiful sexy submissive story. Very good!

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