I decided to so something a little different today and have some fun with hypnosis.
So while I can't say that I totally love the layout of this piece, I had some fun screwing around with different ideas, and when everything was said and done I think it turned out all right.
This is the longest caption I've done in a while, and I have to say it felt pretty good. I doubt I'll have the time to create many more longer pieces like this in the near future, but it was a nice change of pace from my usual "one and done."
As for the story itself, I probably could have done a better job delving into the mind of the poor brainwashed bastard a little more (at least before he got wiped clean), but you can't hit everything with every cap.
So at the end of the day, I'm chalking this one up as a win. I turned out my longest caption in months, and I had a pretty good time doing it.
In other news, this week is looking like it should be pretty light for me, so I'm hoping to keep up this productivity and help make up for how terrible last month was in terms of the number of updates.
Enjoy the weekend everyone!
Very nice, as usual.
ReplyDeleteGreat series Rauk! I really like how the layout changes slightly for the middle. It's as though the 'pet' is getting lost in the first panel, getting her mental training in the middle panels, and is truly lost in the last panel. Very sexy!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm glad the layout ended up working out. It made sense to me as I was creating it, but since I'm still pretty new to that aspect of capping I wasn't sure how it would actually turn out.
DeleteAmazing series of caps. Loved the progression.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great set of captions. I like how the layout, especially at the end reflected the scattered thoughts, or lack of thoughts, the victim has by the end of the process.
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