Sunday, March 10, 2013

Pretty Dollies


Three new captions in a week? What is going on?

So after months of bitching about it, I finally found the time and inspiration this week to regularly turn out new material. Yay!

I have no idea if this trend will continue, but I'm just happy that for the first time in 2013 I feel like a capper again.

As for this piece, I think I found a good middle ground between the general fluff of my older style, and the darker bits of my new one. The story and image are overtly sexual, but rather than just glossing over the darker undertones of the situation, I actually had the narrator acknowledge them, and just not care. I'm definitely going to keep messing around with the ratio of smut to substance in future captions, so who knows where this is all leading to.

In less exciting news, I'm thinking I'm going to have to put the captcha  back on. I've been getting spammed pretty hard these past few weeks, and I'm getting tired of having to manually delete all of them as the google filter doesn't seem to be working as well as it used to. So don't be surprised if that shows up again in the next couple of days.

But enough about that. Because right now, I'm pretty happy. I finally turned out a respectable workload for a week, and I found a bit of my old style without feeling like I was just rehashing the same thing over and over again. Today was a good day.

15 comments:

  1. Great cap Rauk! The tone of the narrator is perfect. That nonchalant tone really works and makes it squrimtastically dark.

    I hear ya on the captcha. More and more are starting to get through on my blog too. Why can't these damned people just leave us all alone!

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    1. Thanks. And while I hate having to reinstate captcha, it's been really nice not having to go through lists of "new comments" only to delete 90% of them.

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  2. Rauk, I loved it. Great story along with the image you provided. I really enjoyed how you incorporated the transformation with it as well. there is something about a character who knows what is happening to them and could do nothing to stop it.

    Great Work!

    xoxoxo Katie Mills

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    1. Thank you. This one was pretty fun to write, especially since I haven't really touched on a transformation in a while.

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  3. omg I love it! :)

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  4. I feel like the newer caps run on a bit and are the narration is more escoteric, mot as clear as the old ones. Maybe when you've used up too many ideas the only thing left is weird.

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    1. Hahaha, that's actually a pretty fair point. I do feel like I've done at least one version of every "standard tg story", so maybe all that's left are my weird ramblings. But as long as people are still reading them, I don't see myself stopping. I hope you like weird!

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  5. Interesting caption! The picture really grabbed my attention, three of my favorite models all in one pic! The story was a little darker than what I'm used to, but it was still enjoyable nonetheless...I wonder what she has all these sissies do all day. Surely she doesn't have them lounge around the house doing nothing?

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    1. I've actually had this picture in my "to caption" folder for a while as it was so good I didn't want to waste it on a sub par story.

      And as for what she does with her sissies all day, I think I'll leave that up to your imagination.

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  6. Loved this cap: the idea of them being left with their cocks until the last step of the transformation where they're so turned on by their transformed selves they cum the last of their male essence and are responsible for their own final cissification due to their weak wills is very naughty and one of the most innovative things I've seen in recent tg caps. Great job!

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    1. Thanks. I was trying to come up with an interesting way to end the transformation and I'm really happy with how it turned out.

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  7. Wonderful caption. I like it very much.
    I started a blog with my TG Captions.
    I hope you like it: http://www.startgcaptions.uni.me/

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